![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png) simont |
Sun 2018-01-21 22:17 |
Initially I tried to mash up the original lines that followed each of the starting pair, but the best I could do with them was
That there's some corner of the Lord I pray has taken me.
which is (a) twee, (b) doesn't really manage to squeeze in several of the most distinctive parts of either original line, and (c) ends up rhyming ‘me’ with itself which is clearly cheating.
After some thought I decided to head in a different direction completely, so my revised attempt at a second line is:
“Twit.” |
|