| Anonymous |
Sun 2010-05-23 22:09 |
Ah, nearly, but too repetitive for a good villanelle. The secret to a villanelle is to come up with ways to repeat the words (or, you know, ish) while varying the sense. Otherwise it's just a poem written to a particular scheme.
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